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paul
paul
Apr 09, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Feast Of The Gods

 The sound Of Dionysian music AwakensThe underworld  Singing with Voices of the gods Throwing agony Into Hades temple  Tonight joy Drinks on me o more pity  Misfortunes Destroyed by Zeus’sThunder bolt     Despair will be left On the dance floors  Apollo’s LyreShall play Till every Heart Is filled With ecstatic  Awe   
— paul, Apr 09, 2010

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loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

the unread poets forum

My intention is to bring u into lime light ‘’In the solitude Of a forgotten love We reside, Oblivious of darkened silence.’’
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

I see the comment zombie has

I see the comment zombie has struck again before me. Sorry about that Paul. What bothers me most is that she doesn't read it or invest in the comments but still leaves stars to effect its rating. I mean really. Gonna bet she has not a clue who you are. I liked your theme, a little more fanciful than recent writes. But I can appreciate it. I had a problem with the lines, Despair will be left On the dance floors At first I thought I had a problem with Dance floor and went searching for a substitute. But after consideration, dance floor was fine. The effect wasn't. Can I suggest... Clearing despair from the dance floor Good read, Julie D.D.

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