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Apr 09, 2010
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My girl
I plant the seed and I watch
it grow
And help whenever the time
is so
For its my best feat yet without
even a try
When I think of her future, I could
breakout a cry
Its my point and purpose to do
all I can
So when she grows up she'll know
a true man
Someone who cares for her with no
greed intend
Who steps right up in this world
to defend
She'll know these good men cause I'll
always be round
For her to compare all others and weed
through the mound
She will see how I treat the girls in
my life
And even being nice to mom my
ex-wife
Thats the way she will always expect
to be treated
And anyone who doesnt, it will get
very heated
If I do a good job also as a good
friend
We will be connected straight up til
the end
it grow
And help whenever the time
is so
For its my best feat yet without
even a try
When I think of her future, I could
breakout a cry
Its my point and purpose to do
all I can
So when she grows up she'll know
a true man
Someone who cares for her with no
greed intend
Who steps right up in this world
to defend
She'll know these good men cause I'll
always be round
For her to compare all others and weed
through the mound
She will see how I treat the girls in
my life
And even being nice to mom my
ex-wife
Thats the way she will always expect
to be treated
And anyone who doesnt, it will get
very heated
If I do a good job also as a good
friend
We will be connected straight up til
the end
— doprific, Apr 09, 2010
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