A Sea of Suds

Your poem shows great perception nicely constructed. Always, Cat

Out of all the many Four letter words I am aware of, I only like four… LOVE, LOVE, LOVE and LOVE Your words are astoundingly lovely But they encompass Only one facet Of love… Recall the moment you were born Your mom was your unknown But most loved love Well done as you share Your love with all, Without love The world There would be no wherewithal. LOVED BY ONE AND ALL

finally getting round to writing again? Hope your year has been going well so far. I like the imagery in this one a lot, especially the second stanza. The image of the ravens and the white sea is particularly strong. The multicoloured feathers add to this, though I am uncertain whether feathers can burst or whether they sort of pierce (?). By the way, do check your spelling of iridescent and erupt again. Or was that on purpose? And if I may, I'd like to advise you to ignore Loved's comment. This very same comment has been posted on various poems by this person. Yours, ~Nina

Yes loved likes to cut and copy her comments and prove she didn't bother to read and is only commenting for herself. I would have gave you 4 stars, but I thought I would give you the extra cause of the inconsideration. Won't make it better, but its what I can do. I loved your imagery and thought that feathers bursting worked well. Funny how I thought that what I got out of this is how the audience can spoil the show, and then the comment you got. Good write! Julie D.D.