Pipe Dreams

O.g. master kush, delight
something for my tummy,
Willie Nelson smooth as silk
bubble jack tastes Yummy;

musty moss flavored hue
gray/green aroma, soft,
seeds are absent from the yield
and it's shadows make me cough.

Charitable donations
placed inside the vault,
a granite skeleton screams out loud
I swear it's not my fault !

Needs, and wants being equal
I enjoy both tooth, and flame,
edibles, and chronic
ask for it by name.

The final quarter is harvest
the healing powers I do invoke,
complacency, and dream time
accompanies the precious smoke.

— docmaverick, Apr 09, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

Critiques

loved

16 years 2 months ago

UNHEARD POETS FORUM

THE PURPOSE OF MY POEM HERE IS TO BRING YOU IN THE LIMELIGHT AS A POET Out of all the many Four letter words I am aware of, I only like four… LOVE, LOVE, LOVE and LOVE Your words are astoundingly lovely But they encompass Only one facet Of love… Recall the moment you were born Your mom was your unknown But most loved love Well done as you share Your love with all, Without love The world There would be no wherewithal. LOVED BY ONE AND ALL

docmaverick

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Loved....

...I do so appreciate you very eloquent response to me efforts. I would hope that you could make the time, to go to: view all works...then to my page 11, and read my poem entitled, The Audacity of Love. Then, of course...I'd most dearly like to peruse your comments, on the poem. In that poem, I really tried to mention every facet of "love. Actually, as I look back.....I'm inclined to believe that some of my best poetry is posted from when I first joined Neopoet ! At any rate, again I must reiterate how lovely your prose was, that surrounded your insightful comment. If you do happen to find the time to read the poems on page 11 of my posts, I do plead with you to leave a comment of any "calibre", if you know what I mean. I guess I just want the "raw truth", like the site asks. Thank-you again, I sincerely appreciate the feedback.....especially from someone so candid ! Thanx again. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.

Ross Hamilton Hill

16 years 1 month ago

What's up Doc?

I like this, the inventiveness and sonics, sorry you havn't got more comments, you're most probably too close to the edge for most, but of couse that's the only place to be if you want to see the view.

docmaverick

16 years 1 month ago

Why, thank-you Mr. Hill....

...you're very generous with your vowelage, and verbage, and I greatly appreciate it ! I agree with you about the view.....it's quite the "vista"! Thanx, again...really, for taking the time to respond to the effort, and thanx for your kind words of encouragement ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.