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I Read a Bit of Nonsense

I Read a Bit of Nonsense

Peptides percolate through the forest glen
Waiting, watching, and singing now and then
First they shuffle to the strange
Settle then and rearrange
Happy, joyous, within the dank moonlight
Sitting, dancing, and poking every sprite.

Peptides canter upon the backs of beasts
Galloping wildly to the midnight feast,
Where they'll sit and drink the day
Shame the moon and run away,
Shouting, laughing, beneath the smiling sky,
Celebrating like Easter in July.

Peptides frolic in every hill and dale
Wearing bonnets and mittens made of mail
First they slink into the sea
Then they scamper restlessly
Leaping, falling, into the vast twilight
Fading, calmly, from everybody's sight.

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Except for a pentameter couplet, trimeter+1 couplet, pentameter couple with an AABBCC rhyme scheme, there really is absolutely nothing going on in this poem.

There is no meaning, there is no purpose beyond the artificial structure and some, to me, pleasing word combinations that give the appearance of meaning where there is none.

This is posted as an example of a nonsense poem.  I do not claim to be skilled in the form  but due to a recent discussions elsewhere on Neopoet, I wanted  to spend a few hours and create an example.

With nonsense poems the word choices are the only meanings.  It is not that the poem is surreal, it is that it is complete and utter nonsense.  Some may be humourous, some may be insulting, some may just be, but they should all give the appearance of meaning without conveying any.

I believe this succeeds but, of course, I welcome any feedback, harsh critique especially.

— Pugilist, Apr 08, 2010

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Region, Country: Jacksonville area, FL, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Keats, Kipling, Carroll, Yeats, Tolkien, Shakespeare

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Jonathan Moore

Jonathan Moore

16 years 2 months ago

I appreciate the review

I had fun writing it. Seriously how often do we get to write a fairy tale about the adventures of: "Any of various natural or synthetic compounds containing two or more amino acids linked by the carboxyl group of one amino acid to the amino group of another." --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)
Beauregard

Beauregard

16 years 2 months ago

wow,

I've never noticed that the way words are put together could make something so nonsensical seem like it has some kind of obscure/deep meaning! That's pretty awesome. Also, Stanza 1: marking--> perhaps 'making' or 'harking' or maybe even 'poking', for something silly? Marking just doesn't sound right to me. But then again, THIS IS MADNESS! so it doesn't really matter, or does it? Damn those polymers and their crazy ways. Kelsey
Jonathan Moore

Jonathan Moore

16 years 2 months ago

I liked poking

I probably have an advantage in this type of thing as I have been in the corporate world for 25+ years and listen to diatribes in meetings all the time consisting of people who desperately want to be and sound smart. But thanks for the read and suggestion. --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)
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Patricia_legacy

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Jonathan

I got a big kick out of your poem. Very creative of you. Glad you left your comment or I would have been lost. I think you accomplished what you wanted to. Pat
Jonathan Moore

Jonathan Moore

16 years 1 month ago

Pat, thanks for the review

In my published work I have a section that explains my motivation and focus for everything I write. It's the teacher in me. I want to explain concept and design and get feedback on how successful it was. It's because although I am inspired just as everyone else, sometimes that inspiration is unconnected to my state of mind or emotional well-being. some of the best love poetry I have written has been inspired by creating poetry that has nothing to do with any relationship. It sounds counter-intuitive on the surface but I am becoming convinced that raw emotion and writing are a bad combination. --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Jonathan

I am guilty as charged I have written nonsense but I try to keep them hidden these days lol every now and then one slips through ... good point and well made one at that loved the poem btw Jayne-Chloe (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

I’ll be back to comment on

I'll be back to comment on this Jonathan when my indigestion passes. ;-) ~A p.s. Sorry about the smilie. I just can't help myself sometimes. "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles