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Burnish



you have had your meal of my ego
tearing down the paper crown
and tinfoil rooms

I can feel your talon words
strip flesh from my wounds

There are scraps of infinity
circling like rasp voiced
angels

and your hand upon me
warm
and sensitive

when I tell you I Love you
I will feel the shadow
of time
invade my heartlock
and the door to the masque
will open

I will greet you
smiling through my ache

this desiring entity of life
falling like ice from limbs
in March

— Esker, Apr 08, 2010

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Hello

It sounds like the kind of love that will strip you bare right down to the bones. Been there... Always, Cat
Esker

Esker

16 years 2 months ago

scraps

I have incorporated many language uses from popular studies and song that are hits on U Tube Basically Lyrics as Poetry personally I have met many walked with many and if i can relate it back through Poetic digress then I say Write it poets write it and Love it Passionate Esker~
Esker

Esker

16 years 1 month ago

had my notebooks

and then blacked them out so they are books with unreadable poems pasted sketchs and small photos am rewriting on empty pages new poems so it will be not the ink fed wasteland I thought it had to be this poem came about when wind was knocking off the frozen rain from the wires and branchs just recently last March