Coloured

Your poem

Makes me feel white

As I was coloured bright

I was born in the middle

Of the darkest nite

Though not last nite,

But not red

Nor white

But a faint pink yellowish

That’s right…

— loved, Apr 08, 2010

Country/Region: ROU

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Loved. I like the sentiment of you poem. Rosina xena465

16 years 2 months ago

my favorite lines are: I was born in the middle Of the darkest nite Always, Cat

16 years 2 months ago

...coloured bright ...not last nite... a faint pink yellowish love it ((((smile)))) love judy

16 years 2 months ago

u made my day i was feeling frustrated no one was reading my poems today thanks to u loved

pamela

16 years 2 months ago

Dear L., I loved it the whole thing, but Of the darkest night though not last night are my favorite. Great Job!

16 years 2 months ago

Great words are only appreciated by greater minds such as urs Rgds Thanks LOVED BY ONE AND ALL

The Seeker

16 years 2 months ago

wonderful words and meanings Love ,Light and Harmony The Seeker..