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evie.haywood
Apr 08, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

It's all for you silly

The breath I just tookI don't have anymore.The memory I just thoughtI lost as you walked by.The shoe I just boughtDoesn't belong to me anymore.The heart that pumps my blood,The lungs that fill with air,They haven't been mine in a long, long time.My sorrows and my smiles,I can't bing myself to claim,The words that come out my mouth And the thoughts that pass my brain.And you don't think i care anymore.When actually, everything I do is for you.
— evie.haywood, Apr 08, 2010

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yenti

yenti

16 years 2 months ago

Evie

This is a beautiful poem and seems heart felt, look to yourself and be great then ask someone to join you on your beautiful journey it is better that way, Yours Ian.T
yenti

yenti

16 years 2 months ago

Evie

Yesterday you cannot change it is how you live in the now is the only important thing, you have a million things to see and the same to do just do them with love and just make sure you are ok as you go along it is your journey and I think that you will make a great one, Yours Ian.T PS:-It would be lovely for you to talk to us a little more maybe you will learn what to avoid from us old ones lol
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loved

16 years 2 months ago

lovely poem loved it

Out of all the many Four letter words I am aware of, I only like four… LOVE, LOVE, LOVE and LOVE Your words are astoundingly lovely But they encompass Only one facet Of love… Recall the moment you were born Your mom was your unknown But most loved love Well done as you share Your love with all, Without love The world There would be no wherewithal. LOVED BY ONE AND ALL