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A legacy of pain

I cast my first stone and met Melanie, She changed me into a whore of sorts, she left me and used mental abuse unsparingly. the step from the stone led to a girl whom I don't recall, she taught me tongue talents. She vanished into the night without goodbye.
The path to the left led to my best friends sisters (Older and  younger) They taught me right, and wrong, they moved after humiliation.
Many adventures after that, but I want to fast forward. I moved to west valley, and that led to Jenna, she was a fox, a real classy girl, my inability to move as fast as she wanted, and my humble tendencies let her stray., she taught me to set the pace. I didn't stray to far from her I then went with her best friend Shalna, I was rejected after a day. I lost control, and let the rejection get to me. I was a little bit of an asshole to her. From Shalna, I rode a bus and met Megan, she was a box full of crazy, she begged for it doggy fashion so that she might be like her beloved pets, I left in a hurry after smelling her crazy. She denied me trust. From Megan came Amber, Amber  is a compulsive liar, and she needed a lot of attention, she begged for pity, and lusted for sex. She taught me finger techniques. From Amber came Dallas, she taught me never to trust girls, she was completely dishonest.
From Dallas came Michelle, she Earned every last bit of my love, and utter devotion, she hid the truth, and
Played around with other boys, she toyed with my mind, and my heart. From Michelle I learned girls only care about themselves.
From myself I've only learned that I need to continue to live, so that I may someday find someone worthy of me, and my talents.

— sunscreen, Apr 07, 2010

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

A confessional that reminds me of the song

"44 lines about 22 women" It could be a lot more than it is if you crafted it as poetry, gave each name a verse or line. It has a lot of potential and I like it. If you would like help editing it just ask, Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 2 months ago

I would indeed like some

I would indeed like some help with transferring it into a poem, Just send me a Pm or something, and we will figure it out.
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

may take a little time

am caught up in some personal stuff at the moment, but remind me soon and I will get to it Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Alex

I agree with Jess on this one it shows a great deal of potential and I like the ideas Jess has put to you above ... good luck with the edits guys i will keep my eye on this thread love and hugs Jayne-Chloe (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!
AS

Aireal Steed

16 years 1 month ago

Girls only care for

Girls only care for themselves??!!?!?!? What is that? I think this is a nice list of the many girls in your life. Just don't think they are all going to end up being the same. Love your best (GIRL) friend, Aireal Steed
AS

Aireal Steed

16 years 1 month ago

Sorta

Your little memoir holds truth in it, but for the most part I hope you learn from your history and try not to let it repeat itself my friend. You are the answer to your life's comings and goings Love, Aireal Steed