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Disloyal

Unable to commit
Never keep promise
Always lead to hurt

Lies occurring frequently
Demand trust to betray
Misleading actions

Denial of truth
Countless betrayal
Courting others.

Using love as a tool,
to treat us like fools,
watch us drool.

Truth revealed
Pain concealed
Fucked emotions.

Insecurities surface
Never felt enough
Wanting pain to end.

Played like a game
Only left to shame
Mocked by fame.

"I've yet to find a consistency, I've yet to have loyalty,
as I've given out. I will continue to search for "the one"
if such a one exists."
Unknown

— sunscreen, Apr 07, 2010

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partacidcharm

16 years 2 months ago

i like this, the ideas and

i like this, the ideas and emotions are honest and almost vulnerable. some parts seem a little...disjointed? although that may very well be your intention.
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Great deep felt poem Alex

Great deep felt poem Alex getting across strong feelings. Rosina xena465