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Apr 07, 2010
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Muted in the Moment
I watched as the panorama
found harmony
the sky slipped into the
white lipped mouth
of mountains
supplication floated
blue turned mute,
mixed with Grey's
of twilight,
her fingers
lightly took one last
grasp on Azimuths cowl,
then disappeared
for the half turn
in a depth of silence
the first movement
of night,
was to regain
her stolen breath
of awe
— Seren, Apr 07, 2010
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Esker
16 years 2 months ago
Brand new poem
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Steven
poewriter58
16 years 2 months ago
Serene
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Chrys
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Jayne
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Cat
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
It reads lovely JayCee. I
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Rosina
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
i look forward to any re-writes
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
I am off my game of late