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Apr 07, 2010
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Found Out
I found out where I'm from
due to a response I made, the other day,
and you could see my past, bubble out of my eyes.
It even temporarily blinded my vision
until I finally realized,
that I was brought up to respond in that manner,
and I was led down a path to where I'm currently at,
and gone were my inhibitions, in the night
for it felt like springtime in my heart.
I had finally found out about myself
and about who I am, thanks to you,
and how you make me want to be a better man;
and I found out some other things, too;
for instance, how much I need your light rain to wash over me
because of how pure you make me feel.
You have made my life so passionate, and focused
that I found out you are the magic in my rainbow,
and your heartbeat is the sound of my thunder;
which I found out, is necessary for me to remain calm,
because the melody of your song carries me to your arms,
and allows me to lose myself inside your storm;
where I remain dry, and warm, and very grateful
that our voices can share the harmonies of your song,
allowing me to find out, that I like the me I am.....when I'm with you !
due to a response I made, the other day,
and you could see my past, bubble out of my eyes.
It even temporarily blinded my vision
until I finally realized,
that I was brought up to respond in that manner,
and I was led down a path to where I'm currently at,
and gone were my inhibitions, in the night
for it felt like springtime in my heart.
I had finally found out about myself
and about who I am, thanks to you,
and how you make me want to be a better man;
and I found out some other things, too;
for instance, how much I need your light rain to wash over me
because of how pure you make me feel.
You have made my life so passionate, and focused
that I found out you are the magic in my rainbow,
and your heartbeat is the sound of my thunder;
which I found out, is necessary for me to remain calm,
because the melody of your song carries me to your arms,
and allows me to lose myself inside your storm;
where I remain dry, and warm, and very grateful
that our voices can share the harmonies of your song,
allowing me to find out, that I like the me I am.....when I'm with you !
— docmaverick, Apr 07, 2010
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Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Doc
docmaverick
16 years 1 month ago
Thanx, for your candidness....
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Doc just what the doc ordered:)
docmaverick
16 years 1 month ago
“Write