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LOVE'S GREAT WOMB YOU BLOOM
Cherries red and rosy,
some deep dark burgundy and others scarlet like the setting sun;
shining cheeks of ripened rouge, sweet, succulent, juicy, dripping
nectars from the bees and moths, their busy spring of visiting
from flower to flower to flower, pollinating unawares
the bower of love's great womb,
that holds the generations, now in spring,
you bloom.
With shaking dancers palest pink or white,
the wild trees standing tall and proud,
sweet, pungent spectres in the night,
the rows along the grassy parks,
transport our souls to thoughts
of secret gentle caresses' in the tresses of your dress,
as petals fall they touch our face,
with graceful flight they bless,
to cover ground just like a lover,
so exquisitely sensitive, other,
intense to his every move, to send the rippling joy
to every corner of his being,
how we love and love the cherry's fall of snow,
and know,
another year will go to join the rest,
as is life's flow.
Critiques
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you for enjoying Ephtickle
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Brilliant Ann. You sure
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
You just reminded me of the
loved
16 years 2 months ago
Cherry Cherry
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
A lovely comment from you L
loved
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Ma'am
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
beautiful visuals annanya
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Takk judyanne