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Apr 07, 2010
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fire breather
when the night
stained us both black
I saw you from the distance
recognized the red blaze
pin point
edge of your cigarette
glaringly precede
your silhouette
and once I stepped inside
you told me you met your man
fire spinning,
twirling torches balancing skin, breath,
and flame
once again I was too late
and simply mistook your
tumbled locks of
volcano
hair for being
tulip colored
If only
I could tango past him,
leaving your fury blissful
brave,
untamed.
stained us both black
I saw you from the distance
recognized the red blaze
pin point
edge of your cigarette
glaringly precede
your silhouette
and once I stepped inside
you told me you met your man
fire spinning,
twirling torches balancing skin, breath,
and flame
once again I was too late
and simply mistook your
tumbled locks of
volcano
hair for being
tulip colored
If only
I could tango past him,
leaving your fury blissful
brave,
untamed.
— whitetea, Apr 07, 2010
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whitetea
16 years 2 months ago
Yes
whitetea
16 years 2 months ago
>
weirdelf
16 years 1 month ago
a step forward
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
I agree with Jess on this