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Apr 06, 2010
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This Spring
This spring
Though it’s beyond
My domain
To comment on my master’s,
Nay, Ma’am’s voice
But I still dare to say
Let me dare to rejoice.
Perhaps twill
Take me a million births
To reach the level
Of your admiration
But let all seasons come and go,
Except the loveliest of this spring
Ah! I sincerely hope
That this spring
Eternal spot lights
On you do bring.
Pardon my brief intervention
Amongst stalwarts
I am nought,
But still I had this lingering thought.
As I’m incapacitated to give vent
Of writing any more
Some day perhaps you‘ll permit
To let me also be your buddy
Just to ensure
That I climb the first step
Of the vertical ladder
Which an opportunity does bring
That you still hope one day
From which
I shall definitely with laurels spring.
— loved, Apr 06, 2010
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xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Another great poem
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Loved
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks
ziggy
16 years 2 months ago
hi
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks zigs
greeneyes
16 years 2 months ago
you are a talent! I loved
loved
16 years 2 months ago
loved by one and all
The Seeker
16 years 2 months ago
Good Morning Loveon
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thank u
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks a lot