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This Spring

This spring


Though it’s beyond

My domain

To comment on my master’s,

Nay, Ma’am’s voice

But I still dare to say

Let me dare to rejoice.

 

Perhaps  twill

Take me a million births

To reach the level

Of your admiration

But let all seasons come and go,

Except the loveliest of this spring

 

Ah! I sincerely hope

That this spring

Eternal spot lights

On you do bring.

 

Pardon my brief intervention

Amongst stalwarts

I am nought,

But still I had this lingering thought.

As I’m incapacitated to give vent

Of writing any more

Some day perhaps you‘ll permit

To let me also be your buddy

Just to ensure

That I climb the first step

Of the vertical ladder

Which an opportunity does bring

That you still hope one day

From which

I shall definitely with laurels spring.

 

 

— loved, Apr 06, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Another great poem

Another great poem loved...All the joys of spring and hope. One wee typo `I think` To let me also be {tour} buddy. Did you mean (your)? Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

thanks i will rectify the typo immediately thanks loved
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Loved

A lovely tribute to Spring and the powers that be. Always, Cat
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

thanks for ur kindness loved
Z

ziggy

16 years 2 months ago

hi

this write might be born out of your time here on neo , interesting .....zigs
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks zigs

how right you are in ur assessment u r a wonder kid /boy /man gr88888888888888888 thanks loved
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

loved by one and all

thanks a million my poetry is ultramodern as i know no rhyme nor rhythm yes also no reason. loved
TS

The Seeker

16 years 2 months ago

Good Morning Loveon

Your pictures are of mother nature are very beautiful and enjoyable, thank you for sharing . Wish you have a nice day Love,lightand Harmony The Seeker