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Angel of loving

 is it the chance
the last that will come
the hope of my waiting
loving rest shared by some

can time be near
my past years
dreams come true
seeing loves beauty
these visions softly you

to display as crimson
thoughts to be seen
in imaginations wonderment
knowing now this is no dream

extending my hand
to the reach of your touch
while lingering breaths of
emotions do such

to warm the mind
resting a souls long search
for this angel of loving
lost as whispers in church


— mantiscepter, Apr 06, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Softly beautiful John …

Softly beautiful John ... you have always had that touch ... I just sigh sigh sigh love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

Angels

You can double post any time you wish, and thank you for your remarks on this poem, much love John Ps Always good to hear from you Byeeeee.
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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

Angels

Hi Bern, I'm John glad to meet you. I'm Happy you liked this poem, that make a few of us>>> thanx so much for your comments, and is nice to meet you. hope to see you again. Mantiscepter.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

I like this one too

LearI have to say I had to read it twice and then slowly and captured every moment of the whisper in between. A nice one for sure Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

Angels

Thank you for your comments on this writing, nice to see you again Magic02. this was a fun poem to write. and like you I am also searching for all the whispers out here. Yhanx again Mantiscepter