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PURITY CAN BE THE PURIST LIE

PURITY CAN BE THE PURIST LIE

 

Purity can be the purist lie

It escort you to benighted secrets hidden inside

A lie that is the purist

Is always banter between a soul and the chase of the mind?

It’s purity, presses’ against reality and the procrastination of denial

 

So telling lies to a friend becomes purely benighted in their  soul are the words like

I love you believe in our friendship

And my words of trust will never transform into the values or a cause

 

So purity can be the purist lie

If you believe in a heart that is pure, will never run and hide

Only through the strength of self-preservation

Can friendship love prosper, floret and survive

 

When she says I love you reputedly, to convince you

In her purity dose, her actions give validation

 Solvency peace of mind

 

Or is this a bitch that only wants the comfort

That you can provide dose she con you  

With your own purist lie

 Believing a heart that is pure, will never run and hide

Thinking that the strength of your love first, then your money

Will adjudicate the countless days you sleep alone at night



— press, Apr 05, 2010

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Mark

Mark

16 years 2 months ago

Press

The word benighted may be used more effectively like this; benighted you hide within secrets so telling lies a friend benighted becomes pure in your soul benighted seems a tricky word but it is all looking good, press.. regards, Mark Resilient Flexibility
press

press

16 years 2 months ago

mark glad to hear your comment

I do believe this is one of the first comments from you I am honored . thank you OK the word benighted means Being in a state of moral or intellectual darkness; unenlightened.So I said It escort you to benighted secrets hidden inside. I thought this was Ok but truly I am glad you read this poem and took the time to comment on it the apples and oranges of a word is not that important to me verse your time in love by your reply Press
Mark

Mark

16 years 2 months ago

ahh the English language

So many meanings for a single word lol Actually I was looking at of the darkness or brought to the darkness so the idea of your meaning is more complex and doth makith sense :) Regards, Mark Resilient Flexibility
M

magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Press good one

As I showed you a little work on the format and this will be a great one, Glad to have met you and keep up your writing. Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived