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Sing it Again
Two little sets of big bright eyes
Smiling up at me.
“Sing it again, sing it again,
sing it again mummy.”
The chores got done in record time.
Dishes after supper
vanished faster than the grime
from your faces in the bathtub.
Floors got swept, tables wiped,
we sang away work blues,
‘cos you two had me,
and I had you two too.
Two little sets of big bright eyes
smiling up at me.
“Sing it again, sing it again,
sing it again mummy.”
When the electric power failed
many times through many storms,
we lit a dozen candles
and sang with guitar chords.
We marvelled at the lightning.
We sang away our fear.
Because we had each other
and there’s power in the number three.
Two little sets of big bright eyes
smiling up at me.
“Sing it again, sing it again,
sing it again mummy.”
Whilst we were travelling distances
in the confines of the car,
we sang it loud and heartily.
Didn’t matter where we were.
Out of key or out of time, it mattered hardly.
‘Cos I had you two too,
and of course you two had me.
Two little sets of big bright eyes
Smiling up at me.
“Sing it again, sing it again,
sing it again mummy
“Some-one to do for,
to muddle through for.
I have you two.
Someone to try for,
to do or die for,
I have you two.
Could be, we three
get along so famously ‘cos
you two have me,
and I have you two too.
Two little sets of big bright eyes
smiling up at me.
“Sing it again, sing it again,
sing it again mummy.”
Critiques
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
xxxx
artygirl87
16 years 2 months ago
Flowed well. Brings to mind
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks L
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you cat
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Lovely Judy. I envy you,
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
love to you rosina
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hey bud !!!
loved
16 years 2 months ago
just lovely
Deadserious
16 years 2 months ago
Aww soo sweet.
chumfin
16 years 2 months ago
a mother writes!!!!!!
chumfin
16 years 2 months ago
5stars for the star!
chumfin
16 years 2 months ago
5stars for the star! oooops!
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
I loved this one so much Judy
poewriter58
16 years 2 months ago
Judy
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks everybody