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Apr 05, 2010
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An evening early in the year
The sun has shone all day,
its veiled layers of clouds float soft as air
in lacy patterns here and there,
the hills are tinted washes, blue
lost in this mist of delicate hue
the sky turned rainbow
in one tiny puff of vapours, mornings dew,
escaped to heaven where,
like me and you, our scores
their scales ascend the evening's arpeggio
and sound the last post out of doors
where night's grey-blue gown now retires
and sends our thoughts to other hours
there to dream of church's spires,
inspired to fall together in our soft sweet desires
and make a pact if this be true, exact
your wisdom sires a spirit new
what wonders we can do in company
in season's dew we bathe so happily.
— Nordic cloud, Apr 05, 2010
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Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Oh Ann such poetic dreams
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
memories annanya
pamela
16 years 2 months ago
a natural
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Yes I do she/it is my teacher in all things
raskin
16 years 2 months ago
Lovely, thank you for such
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
When reading this lovely
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Mercy buckets Crudephriam!
loved
16 years 2 months ago
poetic imagery
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
What a most wonderful poetic comment