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ADDICTION


There is a cycle of dependencythat emanates from deep within, recessed in the Nucleus Accumbens,so let the biology begin.Not far from the Thalamus -the epicentre of regulating emotional responses
 It operates with a circularitythat defies all  polarity -there is no ambivalence in the brain! Addiction is inherentwhether  for loveor pain. Buddhists speak of the sorrow of Samsaraa craving for that which alludes us,a mere vision, an illusion....But they never colluded with theneuro-physicists who construed it or saw cascading neurotransmitters
 bathe  "the dopamine reward pathway"
 that leads straight to heaven and personal gain.
  Addictionis rooted in the very sapof our being,It piggy backs on juicesthat flow into feeling.Cognitive processes that make us "think""THIS IS BEING -we're happy,  we've tried it
 and by God we know  we need more! We are reminded to:down that drink, shoot that heroin,snort that powdergive the roulette another go.Emulate the famous who are permitted to show -a proclivity for sexand whatever other forms of excess,
 without hampering our ability

to say "No!"   BjR  5 April, '10
 
— Bonitaj, Apr 05, 2010

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About the Author

Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down, but briefly :, AUDEN, T.S. ELIOT, DICKENSON, RILKE, THOREAU, RUMI ... the list is endless. Am inspired by many, especially those that live lives of "quiet desperation, and go to the grave with a song still in them" (THoreau)

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 2 months ago

THanks INDI!!

It takes one to know one ;) Fascinating subject though. One doesn't even need to say "BUT THE DEVIL MADE ME DO IT" anymore ;) CHeers Boni
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

Imo, human beings are

Imo, human beings are nothing if not our cravings... our desires. Out of balance, it becomes an *addiction*....we are addictions to ourselves. How can mere atoms insist on so much? lol. Thanks for your poem, Boni. Quite astute! ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you Anna

I am no Buddhist, but I read somewhere that we ought to strike directly at our self-obsessions instead of worrying about them. We will then be able to adopt the transcendental perspective of "lojong". Guess I'll have to go back and practise another 100 years... ;) Boni
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

Great courage! To make knowledge into poetry.

Of course we seek pleasure, in whichever form our particular brain and upbringing delivers it. I subscribe neither to the Buddhist nor the moral view. It is all terribly complex. I think this is one of your best poems. It offers no moral or scientific solution, yet implicitly involves something we can all relate to to some extent, from chocolate to serial murder. I won't go into specific word critique unless you ask, I like it as it is. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 2 months ago

Gee thanks Jess!!

I personally didn't find this a particularly great write - just love the subject matter so much - I try by means of covert instruction - to tell others about it ;) So glad you - of all critics - liked it! lol Boni