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Follow your dreams

There is a place for desire in your heartYour mind comprehends determinationYour imagination goes farther than your eyes can see Your dreams are nobleYour aspirations are aliveYour inspiration knows no limits Take steps to successDesire to achieveDare to dream Amid the upsAmid the downsIn this fast changing worldFollow your dreams Follow your dreamsAnd make it to the topFollow your dreamsAnd take your place amongst the very best in the world You can be the best the world has to offerThe finest in your disciplineThe greatest there isIf you follow your dreams You don’t have to come from a rich familyTo make it to the top in lifeIt doesn’t matter if you come from a broken familyBut it matters that you have a dreamFor in life,Success comes to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams Follow your dreamsFor life without a dreamIs like music without rhythmYes, not worth living   To visualize yourself taking centre stageTo imagine yourself on top of the worldTo picture yourself enjoying the fruits of your successIs to understand what your dreams may come…   
— Thabo Maluleka, Apr 04, 2010

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yenti

yenti

16 years 2 months ago

Thabo

This needs a little Edit here and there but sounds like a very good piece of work, try to cut down on the dreams it drags the poem down a little, looking forward to your next piece, Yours Ian.T
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Thabo Maluleka

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks for your comment Ian.

Thanks for your comment Ian. I will do that. The poem is part of my 2nd anthology which I am yet to submit to the publisher. Thanks for your comment. Regards Thabo
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Best piece of advice I read

in a long time on here!! Great inspiration and that is what I like to write of also. Good one the poem and the meaning behind it. Loved it Kudos Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.