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Apr 04, 2010
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Too Much Broken
A labyrinth of laborious breaths
Following a confusing spiraling line
That evades sound and sure footsteps.
These walls of solitude are slippery,
With no handholds,
A mind trap.........
Filled with suffering
That seeps into the fissures of subconcious.
And questions are cast
From a soul weighed down with the leaden weight
of unstable knowledge,
Causing hope to sink its face
Into the darkness of an abyss
that bears my name.
Following a confusing spiraling line
That evades sound and sure footsteps.
These walls of solitude are slippery,
With no handholds,
A mind trap.........
Filled with suffering
That seeps into the fissures of subconcious.
And questions are cast
From a soul weighed down with the leaden weight
of unstable knowledge,
Causing hope to sink its face
Into the darkness of an abyss
that bears my name.
— Blue_Halcyon, Apr 04, 2010
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Blue
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
I've read that book too!.."Cubic"
Geezer
16 years 2 months ago
Too Much Broken...
Morgana Tragic…
16 years 2 months ago
YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW