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Shine like the pretty moon

Cast your eyes upon the sky,Admire the beauty that is the pretty moonHail the purity in her brightness,When she shines uninhibited,By the transparent clouds and the beautiful stars The perfectly rounded miracle in the sky,She flaunts her beauty to the applauding universe,She shines on even when covered by the cloudsLet her shine,Oh, let her shineFor she is the bright pretty moon Amid the challenges,That life throws at youThrough your trials and tribulations,Shine like the pretty moon In the mist of your problemsIn the face of adversityDo not lose your hopeKeep believing in yourselfFocus on your beautiful dreams,And shine like the pretty moon
— Thabo Maluleka, Apr 03, 2010

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 2 months ago

Hello...

I love this gentle and loving poem... It carries a sublime wisdom and beauty...like the Moon. Simply exquisite. Gentle regards, Raven
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Great

Like my writing I really got this one right on the money!! Good Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.