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PRIMAVERA (A Spring romp!)

 PRIMAVERA  (A Spring romp!)

 

Spring you secretly prepare, 

while all seems dead and bare,

like the presence of the fairies, 

debated waifs of nature's golden hair,

look there the grass lies now prostrate, 

bleached and yellowed, dead, 

and yet found hiding underneath its rounded pate,

new shoots, new blades of green are bred.

 

And on the trees, small swellings still yet brown,

slowly in chameleon style change colour,

so to burst when dawns no longer frown

with leaden mists, and snow lies on the ground;

a wistful frond protrudes in warmth of sun,

and here a shining leaf decides to wave its fragile arms 

revealing so a flower

releasing perfumes and a petal shower,

transforming mud and earth into a carpet fair,

fit for the dainty feet of daisy's passing touch.

 

O spring how you awake our fond desires,

the softness of the fall of water on grey smooth rocks,

your gown so splendid, 

laced with stars of Celandine and Aconite,

then Bells of Blue ring in the forest glades

and Ladys Smock, and Dandelions join in, 

all form the pageant we've been waiting for

we dance, our spirits to the skies they soar.

 

Oh time of year we wish you welcome,

sing as loud a song as birds and bees they hum,

and Summer's sounds begun, 

remind us of the heat on sandy banks

where Buttercups and King Cups bathe their feet

their yellow sheen all gleaming

the gold of earth's fresh blooming,

carry us away on scents of these

and we in paradise will feel at ease.

 

Bring on the rains in Winter's thaw 

and brush this earth with green, 

like sensual fire to lick and touch each tiny bloom,

your magic wand to stir awake

the sensitive delicate petals unfold,

their crinkled life stretched smooth as silk,

their shine reflecting dashing streams, 

those rumbling music waterways,

that pound the rocks and spray bright 

rainbows in the days new sun, now warm.

 

Those burns and becks resounding

here and there, and in this place where I now sit,

remind me of another sight, 

the farmers coming out with ploughs,

to plant the seed of other springing fruits,

the corn, the old potatoes, leeks and beans,

each placed so neatly by the hand of man,

to feed us through the year,

and give our minds a sea of colour, ever changing

as seasons come and go and then we know

we live, we live, we live and then we have to go,

in Autumn's covers, leaves, 

and then comes snow again

the ever moving circle of life's wheel.


 

 

 

 


— Nordic cloud, Apr 03, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Ann

I dance in the petals of your words and find spring again ... sigh lovely poem dear one love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
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Ink Dragon

16 years 2 months ago

L'inverno é passato!

(The winter is over!) Dear Ann, a veritable romp here, your pen must have taken you over. But what pictures you paint, it is a tapestry of spring, reminding me of many a spring song (as you can see from my spontaneous subject line, part of a song, and about the only words I really know in Italian). Enjoyed this one on this cloudy day. Yours, ~Nina
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

Cuckoo cuckoo! Nina.

Ann of Norway My version of it:- My muses are in nature’s hands to tempt my mind to sing with nightingales and forest bands of wolves and owls and wings that flap in leaves of trees that waving back can echoes make to groom my pate to learn of other things those quiet arias in my mind so deeply buried there and give them heart to do their art and fly into the air ** ** ** ** ** ** Yes muses, you all nature hear I praise your every whim I listen to your whisperings and pen them like a twin there placed the words they sing to me from every bough inside my soul of souls is thus set free and through art’s forests glide ** ** ** ** ** ** Oh cuckoo you do call to me come here, come there, no there I dash about to find him so but never find him where I once did see him chattering while on the bough one Whit his voice no longer nyattering perhaps he showed his wit ** ** ** ** ** ** Else he through wooded landscape roams a lone soul on the wing find innocent sweet warblers to lay his eggs right in an egoist one could then say but he’s no choice, he’s made that way how otherwise can he be spread for without him cuckooing is dead ** ** ** ** ** ** ** they call from over there to here and make the sound of lusty cheer we copy him in music fine and smile but never shed a tear oh cuckoo love wilt thou be mine on this the fouteenth day of February in the Spring ‘tis Valentine his way to help sweet lovers sway. My thank you to you, its on the site an earlier one of mine!! Love to you from Ann.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

beautiful imagery annanya

loved it - the sound, the feel the colours i could taste spring. but your srill sad - your last lines give you away ((hug))) xxxxxxx love judy
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

You find me out

Ann of Norway The object with the silver lining is grey However bright the Spring, the poignancy of continuity strides on and turns our joys upside-down and then we're back again in Spring so there's always hope isn't there? Not all our paths are muddy, the sun comes and dries them up as we pass by as aye. annanya loves that she gave you the taste of Spring, was that the perfumes of the flowers? Those bluebells fill the woods of England, Wales and Scotland in a deep blue carpet and smell like hyacinths, they are of the same family but wild, in between are white ones and pink ones and combinations as if Spring had fun playing with their genes and telling some to be of other colours. Different from the norm, that's Spring for you too, no? My mother was very much in love and thought she would marry someone, they stood on the hill beneath a little wood looking at the spread out bells of blue, my mother exclaimed that she didn't' know if she was really there it was too good to be true. That I shall have in the book of my families poems if I ever get around to compiling it, what with new computers not supporting old prog's etc. bother them, they give us double work!!! She didn't marry him but he sent her flowers and cards at every birthday and at Easter( a minister) for the rest of his life. Was it the bells of blue? Or was it her blue eyes? I guess it was her joy of living and her poetic mind. Dear Mummy, Maisie, Marion Agnes. She hated the second name but that is Nordic!!! As her ancestors came from the Orkney's they probably were Nordic, and I have just come home? Love to you, as your Autumn is mentioned here too, it is coming fast to swallow your Winter. judyanne with the sensitive heart.
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pamela

16 years 2 months ago

truly spring is here

Dear A., You have given words to the soul of spring. I love it. P.
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 2 months ago

AH Anna

as Autumn is fast approaching here, you so make me wish I was in the Northern Hemisphere! Good descriptive write! Boni
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

I Dare loved does though scared

Spring Though it’s beyond my competence To comment on my master’s, Nay Ma’am’s voice But I still dare to say this. Perhaps it will [twill] Take me a million births To reach the level of your admiration but let all seasons come and go, Except the loveliest of this spring, Ah! I sincerely hope That this spring An eternal spot light On you do bring. Pardon my brief intervention Amongst stalwarts I am nought, But still I had this simple thought. As I’m incapable of writing any more, some day perhaps you‘ll permit To be a buddy Just to ensure That I climb the first step Of the ladder Which an opportunity does bring That you hope one day I shall definitely spring. LOVED BY ONE and ALL
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Beautiful descriptions of

Beautiful descriptions of how even when the season past has died there are new shoots just waiting to be born with the next stage in nature. Lovely Ann, really lovely. Rosina xena465
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 2 months ago

My Queen...

You still have the touch. You breathe a warm breath, with the pen in hand Bringing Spring to the land Not dead yet, you birth a bud of Spring I love the feeling that you bring Sir Gee salutes the monarch, she is the epitomy of Mother Nature, bringing the Sun to my face. Loved it! ~ Sir Gee
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

I enjoyed your comments all

Ann of Norway Thankyou, I waft the perfumes of the woods of England all over the world to refresh yor minds; there is such a thing as Aroma therapy, I go up to the flowers in the shops here, lacking my garden, sigh! And I smell the daffodils and primroses and sigh again. Gee thank you for stepping off your horse to walk with me in the wood. Love your friend Ann To all, to all, to all.