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things that make you go hmmmmmm

folks that demand from others what
they are unwilling to give
but then again I'm not quite over that
hump, and speaking of humps,
did you ever see a camel wayyyy up close,
don't they have beautiful eyelashes
even if they spit like cowboys?
(now, don't get bent out of shape, I'm
FOR cowboys & cowgirls)
but I'm really confused about all this
talk .... pussies every where with teeth.
(what an image to bare in mind)
however, after all those things go bump
in the night, (shhhh!)--

I'd much rather have a mind to sink
teeth into.  Be that as it may, my heart
rules my....
so I let the rest of me talk for myself,
but then again, I'm not much of a talker...
especially when my pussie goes hmmmmmm.....








— Kailashana, Apr 03, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dearest Mummy

Damn your good ... you just inspired a poem should I be bad and I mean really bad ? ...:) lmfao I love that last line still smiling love you JayCee x x x
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 2 months ago

Oh so funny

I never thought they had teeth either until mine clenched but hey great for peeling grapes...ha ha ...It doesn't bite, honest. It is just so hilarious that the flow of an idea in one poem has ignited a wash of bursting thoughts. Its the freedom inspired by the use of words we might want to use but may not be brave enough to, actually it is exactly what Neo is all about. Freeing up language and articulation. Seabhac
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

Miaow miaou mai mai tut tut.

Ann of Norway Got the hump on your bump of a mountain in disguise with the beautiful eyes of flashing demise as you let it all lie in the sound of you purrs it occurs to me now that story incurs my consent, you might even relent. Well now there was this camel, just standing doing no one any harm, beside him stood his owner, and a tourist happened along and asked him the time, the owner bent down and lifted the camels genitals and said "its half past twelve." The tourist was so fascinated that the weight of the genitals could tell the time that he thought he would try the same thing himself. Well he lifted the genital, all was revealed, there across the square was the village clock, and on lifting them up the time was clearly visible! Baaa! Yes Jayne be bad! Love to my sister Anna, standing atop the mountains looking out over the desert of despair!