the sun is setting on a perfect day

Just beautiful this peace. Thank you Happy Easter to you and the family Love, Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

Very beautiful. I love, how in that first stanza, you conjure an image of how he is sitting, his posture, in thought, and how you are wrapped in him, because you are part of his mind, his memory. It is he and the memory or thought of you, that listen, and yet you are the voice of his ideation. Love the ride through the 'sky', 'blue', 'vulture', touching down to 'earth', 'leaves', 'moss' - which parallels and expands upon the wind/pine of the first stanza. This is a piece of sorcery. :)

heart warming

for always being on hand with words to take us away ... and inspire thank you for the constant gift of your poetry and yourself love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x

Ann of Norway "the scent of earth, you adorned my hair with leaves,".......oh this reminds me of my friends marriage in a reg, office but they enacted some beautiful rituals of their own creating, with a wooden circle in which they both stood as they got married, they stepped in and raised the circle slowly reciting their own created poem to each other as it rose up.... I don't remember all the details but there were flowered garlands in their hair and around the circle; while the registrar looked on patiently waiting for the ceremonies to abate to finalise the marriage legally. One of my haïku-like poems:- Shrubs on the hidden path throw pollen on the marriage I hear music or is it just the song of the nightingale ? Love to you (pl) dearest Anna.

A beautifully flowing write. Feelings of peace and serenity. Descriptive and a joy to read. Love Lyz. XX