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Apr 01, 2010
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against anything is to be at war
there are places
I have yet to walk
within the crystal raindrops
and tears
such separations of self
rain and these tears are never parted
they are mentioned in the phantom reasons
that clouds pass through, capturing the sun
nothing is so much falling again
that I forget to gather your
lilac scent before the butterflies of light
love's purity is a distant silence
beside me in your pillowed hair...
I sleep in the bed's pressed edge
of shadows and unheeded
repositories of truth.
I am not part of
these, too many eyes of round
planets, our galaxies pass within
one another
Love is our forever folded hands
walking in the rain.
I have yet to walk
within the crystal raindrops
and tears
such separations of self
rain and these tears are never parted
they are mentioned in the phantom reasons
that clouds pass through, capturing the sun
nothing is so much falling again
that I forget to gather your
lilac scent before the butterflies of light
love's purity is a distant silence
beside me in your pillowed hair...
I sleep in the bed's pressed edge
of shadows and unheeded
repositories of truth.
I am not part of
these, too many eyes of round
planets, our galaxies pass within
one another
Love is our forever folded hands
walking in the rain.
— Orphani, Apr 01, 2010
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
it matters not where the
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
You cast a spell on us Barry
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Barry
Mr.peoms
16 years 2 months ago
this peom is great.
themoonman
16 years 2 months ago
Barry...
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
those moths of night that flutter in the dark
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
I thought it was a bit pretentious