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Apr 01, 2010
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Magic suitcase
everytime she fills the case
she moves
takes the life
that folds
and special pocket folders
held by bands
and snaps
the metal close
the handle crafted
keep it empty and she stays
dreamcatchers hang
on windows
catching dreams
the sky changes colours
from grey to violet
breezes move
neath open
sash
Shes filling it again
and when its full
she'll be en route
leaving
behind the leavings
only light and shadow
smokescreen
and player
sunlight in her pale
eyes
— Esker, Apr 01, 2010
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Esker
16 years 2 months ago
a freinds story
Esker
16 years 2 months ago
Hull
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
This is Amazing write Esker
Esker
16 years 2 months ago
write our rights
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
The title captured me
Esker
16 years 2 months ago
So true
Esker
16 years ago
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