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Apr 01, 2010
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Grace
Floating motionless,
astir around
a dark tunnel of nothingness.
Being, aware,
the moment all.
A pinpoint glint
a beacon
a circle of manifest
widening into
a blaze of calm grace.
Revealing illumination
more vivid than a cloudless day
exposing
harmonious peace,
compassionate warmth,
utter, unqualified love,
blissful joy, laughter,
serenity,
acceptance.
Swinging doors.
In another place I wipe clean
a stain.
— judyanne, Apr 01, 2010
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Critiques
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
swinging doors..
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you ellie
chumfin
16 years 2 months ago
its soothing and smooth!
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hello chum
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hey bud !!!!!
Roscoe Lane
16 years 2 months ago
I think i drifted,
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
calm
Roscoe Lane
16 years 2 months ago
Sorry forgot,
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
your last two lines had me
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks jc
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Judyanne, you know what love is.
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
you have a deep understanding my annanya
pamela
16 years 2 months ago
beautifully chilling
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks P
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hi licia
loved
16 years 2 months ago
stains
loved
16 years 2 months ago
fiver for washing stains i misssed it washing my own
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you so much loved
artygirl87
16 years 2 months ago
I liked the way it is seen
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks L
DawningDaytripper
16 years 2 months ago
Wonderful description of
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hi DD