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Generation Eighties

Generation Eighties

I love beauty

it can be

In a picture,

In nature,

A kid,

A girl,

A boy

Even in an idea.

I sow love,

And

As I see faces

As lovely as yours

I don't see anything else

Beyond love…

No not sex

Not any more

For you all are

Of the Eighty's creation

Of that I’m quite sure,

I can match up with you all
No more,
No more,
No more………….

Loved

— loved, Mar 31, 2010

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Critiques

lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Loved

A terrific piece and I loved the eighties, lol. Lyz. XX

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

me to my maximum friends r they as they teach me a lot even today loved

panaella

16 years 2 months ago

liked this

the 80's were....interesting...big hair...shoulder pads....new romantics...yuppies....massive mobile phones... so anyone born then is far too young for you, methinks! lol Ells x

loved

16 years 2 months ago

ur right

yaaaaaaaah 22222222222 youngish physically not mentally my max friends r in that age group they teach me a lot loved

The Seeker

16 years 2 months ago

Enjoy the verses

Enjoy the verses of this rhyme all the the charming traits of the Eighty’s creation. Love ,Light and Harmony The Seeker

loved

16 years 2 months ago

THANKS

Thanks for ur kindnesss loved

The Seeker

16 years 2 months ago

You are welcome

lovedon I just love the beautiful simple to enjoy . Love ,Light and Harmony The Seeker

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

thanks seeker what do u seek???? loved

The Seeker

16 years 2 months ago

That is very nice of you

Well about life , although is life about searching out the grounds of individuals to enjoy each day. " Our ever excitable minds with our own self-definitions " The Seeker

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

Ann of Norway I can match up with you all no more, no more, no more.............is how I would have said this. As for sex being separate from beauty or love, it is not, it all depends on how you look at it, it is the most intimate, PRIVATE happening between two people, not in the least ugly or vulgar, unless one looks at it as such, which when in love one doesn't, it is the most natural thing in the world. You are sewing love in this poem how do you do that without sex? Not fond of a 'kid' prefer a child, but its probably not so odd to others. Try metaphor a bit too and speak of people with other elements you have a small vocabulary, not that that should be a handicap if the poem is said in the most succinct manner possible and still retain the description of a poem. Just my thoughts L, Respectfully yours Ann.

loved

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Ma'am

A considerable number of people think That I am still available That apparently is a misnomer Hence the generation gap poem...You are right when you exhibit and say That my vocal is extraordinarily restricted, yes but not limited. I without reference to the dictionary, Barely know over 2500 words which are grossly inadequate. Also as you have mentioned earlier If I devote more time towards Quality than quantity Perhaps I may perform more nobly. I shall hence forth do so as advised And magnanimously counselled by you None the less I appreciate the tone Behind the veiled texture of your deliberation, I may sound too verbose, Conceited and megalomaniac, I do since I suffer from the cancer of my EGO. But I’d prefer simplicity, As on the other site I post my work on Have people of intensely limited comprehension. You perhaps take me to be From the Egyptian Ancient and archaic world But I am now a Canadian- based person for quite some time. With fondest and warm regards. Don’t worry your comments Have not brought excruciating pain, In as much as you may intend to comprehend. I can match up with you all No more, No more, No more………….