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Mar 31, 2010
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Queen Of The Forest Elves.
Dancing in the deep green of the forest,
Her home, her kingdom, her haven,
Eyes of ocean blue, hair the color of fire,
Her skin as white as milk.
Carefully she protects her forest,
All living things,like her own children.
Rejoices with the doe and her knew fawn,
Grieves with the fox whose litter did not make it.
She makes flowers bloom from her tears,
And they grow from her loving touch.
Her sweet voice sings a lulliby as night falls,
Peacefully her realm falls into dreams.
They will be safe, for she watches,
And watches, she will, throughtout the night.
— greeneyes, Mar 31, 2010
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Critiques
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Loving it.
Roscoe Lane
16 years 2 months ago
Sounds like nature
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Magical green eyes
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Green Eyes
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 1 month ago
Ahh such a sweet melody...
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Dale, good to here
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Dale, good to hear
ngaioBeck
16 years 1 month ago
Queen