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strawberries of laughter

1.

it's as though you were deep inside me
and then
through some strange alchemy
of fog
and uncertainty
you enter my willing flesh,
white swans of desire
hiss and insinuate our hands,
antelope bleed into ashes
and the snow

ancient memories:
bared teeth, sinew and bone,
flesh

the sunrise prays the day,
we are absorbed now

drown inside the sea of us
like unwritten poems
a feather descends
and flames of rapture
consumes
this taste of us:

strawberries and chocolate
mangoes of lightning
zigzag
across the wilderness
our faces like marble,
encased in veins

gods on earth


2.

only the binding light
remains in your lover's breath
as I wash breakfast dishes
with bubbles of laughter









— Kailashana, Mar 30, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

My sweet Indi, for me it’s

My sweet Indi, for me it's poetry.... Ask me specific questions. I'll try to answer. K? Love, Me "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
Z

ziggy

16 years 2 months ago

hi

hi, this gets my nom so well written sorry for not checking out your page of late , mad busy ere ,,,,,,,,,,,,ziggy
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

Zigs, it’s just plain good

Zigs, it's just plain good to know you're here. Thank you for reading. ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

And you have such a way with

And you have such a way with understanding. ;-) Love, Anna "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

There is a flowing Joy in

There is a flowing Joy in your poetry lately it leaves me speechless beautiful poem love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

Joy is nice… bliss is even

Joy is nice... bliss is even nicer. I get double my pleasure. ;-) Love, Mummy "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
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Draki

16 years 2 months ago

Wow. You really conveyed

Wow. You really conveyed that hiss! Loved the play on whiteness, from the swan to the flames, which are implied to be white, before the coming to fruition in colour. Very intriguing. ...actually, the way in which you entice me to be persuaded that the feather is white, because of the pale palette you have been using, and even to see foam on the sea, or the crests of waves although they aren't mentioned, but because they are white, as is that the sunrise... Will be keeping an eye. ~Draki
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 2 months ago

Oh I liked that, very

Oh I liked that, very primal. I loved the animalistic flow and instinct and tantalized many a sensation. Good read, I bet I shall return for more of this feast. Julie D.D.
TS

The Seeker

16 years 2 months ago

Passionate Poems

in heart and soul of every being ,very uplifting That reminds lifts up your mind endless glance . Wish u have a nice day . Love ,Light and Harmony The Seeker
Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 2 months ago

Only a woman,

in love could write this, hope i'm correct. Your discription while washing the breakfast dishes seems spot on,like it a lot, Regards Roscoe..