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Mar 30, 2010
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strawberries of laughter
1.
it's as though you were deep inside me
and then
through some strange alchemy
of fog
and uncertainty
you enter my willing flesh,
white swans of desire
hiss and insinuate our hands,
antelope bleed into ashes
and the snow
ancient memories:
bared teeth, sinew and bone,
flesh
the sunrise prays the day,
we are absorbed now
drown inside the sea of us
like unwritten poems
a feather descends
and flames of rapture
consumes
this taste of us:
strawberries and chocolate
mangoes of lightning
zigzag
across the wilderness
our faces like marble,
encased in veins
gods on earth
2.
only the binding light
remains in your lover's breath
as I wash breakfast dishes
with bubbles of laughter
it's as though you were deep inside me
and then
through some strange alchemy
of fog
and uncertainty
you enter my willing flesh,
white swans of desire
hiss and insinuate our hands,
antelope bleed into ashes
and the snow
ancient memories:
bared teeth, sinew and bone,
flesh
the sunrise prays the day,
we are absorbed now
drown inside the sea of us
like unwritten poems
a feather descends
and flames of rapture
consumes
this taste of us:
strawberries and chocolate
mangoes of lightning
zigzag
across the wilderness
our faces like marble,
encased in veins
gods on earth
2.
only the binding light
remains in your lover's breath
as I wash breakfast dishes
with bubbles of laughter
— Kailashana, Mar 30, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
My sweet Indi, for me it’s
ziggy
16 years 2 months ago
hi
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Zigs, it’s just plain good
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
you have such a way with words anna
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
And you have such a way with
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
There is a flowing Joy in
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Joy is nice… bliss is even
Draki
16 years 2 months ago
Wow. You really conveyed
Draki
16 years 2 months ago
Wow. You really conveyed
DawningDaytripper
16 years 2 months ago
Oh I liked that, very
The Seeker
16 years 2 months ago
Passionate Poems
Roscoe Lane
16 years 2 months ago
Only a woman,
Bonitaj
16 years 2 months ago
Primordial and passionate!