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Omega :

Whitest fire, was the crystal water
of the cold morning light, the evil air
devoid of heat, lay guttered on dead earth
where once ran silver streams, of fertile skies
and into pools,
across a grassy land.

We’d walked along rivers, beneath rainbows
beside the sea, through forests and deserts
and explored the oceans; out to the stars :
shining in space, but made ourselves islands
where we burned our own breaths,
waiting for warmth

We’ll finish flight, around this wrapping rock
on broken wings, to flap and come to flame
not as phoenix feathers : and that great wave
to gut the garden, and the dark hearth of hell
dug to come our grave,
shall set it’s sail.

No raven’s bread, for in the lightening flash
when wind rips flesh from bone, and a gale
grounding mountains, the horn’s! unholy blasts
will set this world ablaze, the sky will drop
It’s last of light, for I,
am become Death.

— Draki, Mar 30, 2010

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Draki

16 years 2 months ago

Indeed it is, dark - and

Indeed it is, dark - and lovely Thank you muchly, Yours sin-seerly, Wonder Fully. x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

hello

my favorite lines: No raven’s bread, for in the lightening flash when wind rips flesh from bone, and a gale grounding mountains, the horn’s! unholy blasts will set this world ablaze, the sky will drop It’s last of light, for I, am become Death. Brilliant poem, right up my alley! Always, Cat
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Draki

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you Cat,Glad you

Thank you Cat, Glad you like, much Pleased. x Of the last part You tell, so it culminate Swell! : ) We are raven’s Bread; is this Raven Cat’s bread? ; ) Yours Thank-kingly, Brilliantly, - your ally. x
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Draki

Another dark tale ... you know how I love them :) smiles love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x
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Draki

16 years 2 months ago

Hand there!’s Me think

Hand there!’s Me think : King this poem Was hardly Seren(e)! Pum seren Gan Seren! (Cymry) Yours since-early, Love Hugly, x
dhruv

dhruv

16 years 2 months ago

dark only begins to define

dark only begins to define how lovely it is. the irony in the sentence tells the story of its brilliance. an amazing write!
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Draki

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you for commenting,

Thank you for commenting, glad you liked it. :) It's from the Bhagavad Gita : "If the radiance of a thousand suns were to burst forth at once in the sky, that would be like the splendour of the Mighty One. I am become Death: Destroyer of Worlds.".
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Brilliant

By no means disappointed and all above have said it all. Great read. Love Lyz. XX Amazing.
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Dalton

16 years 2 months ago

Almost biblical in the last

Almost biblical in the last verse. As if you were revealing the end of the world in your vision. I like it. John
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Draki

16 years 2 months ago

It is the end of the world,

It is the end of the world, but it is for all of us when we die - we all experience our Apocalypse. Thanks for commenting.