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Dulcie
She stands so proud and straight
The babe tight in her arms
He sits before her in a wicker chair
His arms about one son
The older boy stands to the side
His hand on his dad’s leg
It’s a pretty family photo
A keepsake of her birth
They’re all dressed in fancy togs
A hat upon her head
The newborn swathed in woollen white
Her man in Sunday best
The boys in shorts and socks and coats
Reminiscent of little angels
Hair brushed flat upon their heads
And on their foreheads curls
A happy picture so you’d think
But look a little closer
Seek their eyes and you will see
An emotional exposure
Confusion in the children’s
Gentle puzzlement in his
And in the woman’s holding the child
Unmistakable grief
The adults are my grandparents
The boys my Uncle and Dad
But two are missing from the snap
And one won’t be coming back
For as my Nan had my Aunt
I imagine how she cried
Whilst she'd given birth to the honour of the photo
Her two year old daughter had died
Critiques
point.of.redemption
16 years 2 months ago
wow
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks annie
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dea Judy
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks cat
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks jc
artygirl87
16 years 2 months ago
An emotional,touching piece
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks L