Sweet Blue

Sights of springtime
are here at last

The darkness of winter
in the fading past

Warming of raindrops
a sweet smell of dew

Honey bees flying
to bells colored blue

Fields of brightness
Sun shining down

feelings of hope again
Hearts have now found

— mantiscepter, Mar 30, 2010

About This Poem

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Country/Region: USA

Critiques

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear John

This is a beautiful awakening of spring lovely poem ... sooo good to have you back you write the most calming poetry love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x

mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

Sweetness

It is a great time in the seasons, and I just love it. happy you took to this poem, and I know the feel is slow warm and so inviting, just the way I see spring. Love the smell in the air, brisk breezes mixed in brilliant sun, casting well remembered shadows from years past. Thanks for your comments. Love John.

lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Dear John

Spring has sprung as Autumn has sprung here, not that it feels that way, but your poem has a nice feel and I love the title as well, fave color,lol. We have had a few bees appear as well, odd, the seasons here are all skew whiffed. Our frogs and bees are declining so it was nice to see some around the garden and to here a lone frog croaking at night. Lovely spring poem. Lyz. XX

mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

all my sunny :

Hey Lyz, sorry about rubbing all these beautiful sunny days into your spectacular beautiful fall, [Autumn] I have gone to the site you sent me , and WOW!!! all I can say. And I did send a private message, and I will look on my email as soon as I'm done. thanx for the comments on the poem. and sorry to hear about the frogs and bees, be glad to send some of my bees to you.. talk later. Love John