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Bravo! ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

I would love to "spoke" this or at the very least hear it ! big time kudos and a ^5/spot! Mark Resilient Flexibility

congrates on the light ... wonderful writing ... my favourite lines Beg to rejoice In your hazel eyes That keep one mesmerized Love JayCee x x x

This could be the first time I have nominated a love poem to spotlight! Beautifully written, scans well, wordcrafting excellent, emotional content sincerely intimate without a trace of triteness or cliche You made me have a feeling, you bastard. The only line that doesn't quite work for me is- That keep one mesmerized perhaps just mesmerising would do. Cheers, Jess, “The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue.” Emma Goldman

Dreams that lost wings, at the sound of goodbye. She didn't deserve someone who could say it like that! ~ Gee

beautiful and tragic, very good!

Very nice, but we have to get that formatt undercontrol. Well worded, hardly felt like a love poem. The longing and angnst were felt. I loved it Paul. Well deserved spotlight. Julie D.D.

My favorite lines are: Words that were said Seem to keep me company This winter night Dreams that lost wings At the sound Of goodbye melancholy and romantic. the ending lines are killer. a nomination and stars. Always, Cat

HA. Got it right on the second try (forgot the 3rd 'o' the first time). Although, I may have put in an extra 'u' that isn't necessary on 'Paul', but my eyes could be playing tricks on me! I'm back!!! I like everything except the line 'This winter night' on the second stanza. Something about it just doesn't fit to me. It seems too abrupt, I think. Perhaps 'on this winger night' or maybe 'on winter nights'. Well that second suggestion is the same amount of syllables as what you already have but it somehow sounds less abrupt to me...hmm. Just let me know what you think, okay? Kelsey PS: congrats on spotlight!

i especially liked the first two stanzas. Those nights are most memorable as well as most haunting.