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Starry_Nights
Starry_Nights
Mar 29, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Love Smitten

 I've thrown myself out thereEvery single day I knew.Now I'm done with this despairI just want something new. We work together everydayBut far away from me, you stay.You know how I feel for you,That makes me feel more blue. I listen to sappy love songsThinking of what could happenIf our lives were intertwined.Still this sadness prolongsSo my heart is all misshapenAnd my eyes are just blind. 
— Starry_Nights, Mar 29, 2010

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 2 months ago

good work,

Ive thrown myself out there. Just try leaving some words out sometimes, every single day i new. like i have as an example, Regards Roscoe.. Now i'm done with my dispair, Hope this helps. I just want something new. We work together everyday, but far away from me,you stay. You know how i feel for you, that makes me feel more blue.