your kisses on my breath

I inherited three things:
rain,
passion and breath

from these I create
my poem

for these I die again
and again.

— Kailashana, Mar 29, 2010

16 years 2 months ago

Nicely done, say what you have to say and end the poem without over working it. I give it FIVE STARS!

lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Beautiful, soft and put a sigh at the end. Perfect. Love all. XX

16 years 2 months ago

This one grabs ... powerful words ... you inspire me to be better love and hugs Jayne-Chloe again and again you inspire all around

16 years 2 months ago

Congrates on the light (hugs) love JayCee x x

16 years 2 months ago

i invented kiss sex and human mind and on these three I tell all humanity we all survive LOVED BY ONE AND ALL