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The Lord of the manor
The Lord of the manor two centuries old
Imposing a stature charming and bold.
Black marbled limestone and sturdy wood beams
Cajoling a waltz of nonchalant dreams.
A storm whips lightning at the old clock tower
Time tics back through a portal of power.
A countess in petticoats ringlets and curls
Treads the oak staircase in bodice and pearls.
Her eyes sweep over her fashionable fan
Seeking the gaze of a soft gentle man.
The hearth glow flicks shadows on the wall
Tracing his posture elegant and tall.
How striking he looks bearing scabbard and sword
Coated in diamonds befitting a Lord.
Young viscounts and ladies in buckles and bows
Partake of snuff while old gentlemen dose.
While open sash windows gulp in the breeze
Drinking the fresh breath of golden grove trees.
She flirtatiously sashays turning his head
Her raven hair laced with ribbons of red.
Absorbed in the mirror reflecting his gaze
His image excites her heart to ablaze.
But duties are calling that she must amend
She takes polite leave to help out a friend.
He bows to the countess, she curtsies goodbye
Fixing a glint in the nobleman's eye.
The old clock stops at eleven thirty five
The portal shuts as she trots down the drive.
The house comes alive if you look in its core
Inspiring stories forever more.
Look in the entrance by the strong gothic door
You might get to see the Lord of Cawdor.
Critiques
mand
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Mr Crud, not happy
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hi mand
mand
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Judy, nice to hear
mand
16 years 2 months ago
Hello Licia, great to hear
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Mand
mand
16 years 2 months ago
Hello Cat, Thanks for
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Wow
mand
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks for your kind
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
Oh are you at one of Wales's castle ruins and happened to see
mand
16 years ago
th
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
Yes Mand Cawdor Castle is particular isn't it?
mand
16 years ago
Wow! You’re amazing the
Bloodstone
16 years ago
I think you did a stunning job
mand
16 years ago
Hi Bloodstone, Thanks for
magics02
16 years ago
Amazing Imagery
mand
16 years ago
Hello Mona, Lovely to see
ngaioBeck
16 years ago
Lord of the Manor
mand
16 years ago
I guess I’m being a bit
DawningDaytripper
16 years ago
I loved that ryhme and flow
mand
16 years ago
Hello Julie, Thanks for