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Paths

Once again I won't get what I wanted
Continuing the habitat to feel haunted

I could tell you all about it any day
Pretending you're not walkin' down a seperated way

And by now you're part of my unfortunate collection
Although it must have been lovely not to feel rejection

To a man no longer capable of remembering dreams
The idea of you created new exciting schemes

She's constantly in my head
Yet I risk not to make her mad

Knowing right, being wrong
Seems to be my favourite song
 

— Mike, Mar 29, 2010

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Mike

16 years 2 months ago

that’s what it actually

that's what it actually is.... :-) thanks for ya feedback, highly appreciated.... have a great easter-weekend... kind regard, michael
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

I can relatebto this

I hope the path I'm taking now leads me to true love. If it doesn't I will be back writting sad poems. That's what I'm best at. LOL. I enjoyed your poem. Keep writting and take care. huey