Electric Blue

Mar 29, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Stop Lights

On a cold day clear and bright
fresh and crisp
Dream of being by the fire
stop light red warms you
Amber lights melt you
Green lights of summer days

Red I look into embers of my log fire
so enticing safe and warm
melts my insides

Amber mysterious aurora
magical images appear
of the unknown

Green dreamy summer days
green grass swaying
in a gently breeze

Electric blue

— Electric Blue, Mar 29, 2010

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Country/Region: GBR

Critiques

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Maggie it was like you took

Maggie it was like you took a canvas and painted it for me really, well done ! love and hugs Jayne-Chloe

Electric Blue

16 years 2 months ago

Stop Lights

Dear Lady Jayne Hello, yes being a artist color does create such vivid images. I hope it conjured up your own images hugs Electric blue

Esker

16 years 2 months ago

At the moment

Not of the then or of the Now bathed in the eye of the glow thinking of the know Most marvelous worded Poem Esker~

Electric Blue

16 years 2 months ago

Stop lights

Esker Welcome my friend Thank you for your lovely comments yes just bathed in the glow of colours you watch and the more you watch the lights become blurred and images appear. always Electric Blue

lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Long time, it seems, and here we are greeted by such a vivid warm write from the Mistress. I am pleased I never missed it. I hope you are doing well. There is a tweak of sadness here, but you, as Seren says, have put this poem to canvas. Bravo. Love to u. XX

Electric Blue

16 years 2 months ago

Stop lights

Liz Yes on route to work stop lights constantly changing but the glow of the lights i am drawn into the magic they become always xx Electric Blue

Esker

16 years 2 months ago

I like this comment Electric

My fave moment is at junction of major highway intersect twenty four lights and counting (cross walk signs) three per lane! I like how its all automated Everyone looking at the morning walkers and the morning walkers looking at the car movers truck drivers bus sitters Esker~ (yes the images blurring!!)

magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Maggie

I love this one and where are you friend? I miss you here and know of all you been through. I am awaiting your return friend, and know I am thinking of you at this time. Much love and hugs my blue!! Great poem by the way Mona xoxoxox Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

ziggy

16 years 2 months ago

hi

hi , good to read you again i know i am late to this but your name just popped into my head while on neo chat soon we hope ,,,zigs ,,,,,

Electric Blue

16 years 1 month ago

stop lights

zigs Sorry been off line a while mama passed away so been away dealing with business catch up soon hugs Magz

ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

MAGZ

hi there i am so so sorry to hear your sad news my thoughts are with you and yours ,zigs x

Electric Blue

16 years 1 month ago

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Zigs Thank you my friend, I will be in touch soon magz