a neopoet still

letting me out though denying
my credit lying crying and dying
but comments and stars
won't buy houses or cars
but i'll be damned
if i ever stopped trying

— the_fool, Mar 29, 2010

About This Poem

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Region, Country: Austin, TX, USA

Critiques

R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 1 month ago

how greatly said the fact

how greatly said the fact about human intention. shan

DawningDaytripper

16 years 1 month ago

You got it, we can never

You got it, we can never stop trying! Julie D.D.

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Hahaha. We all have day jobs, eh? ~A "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach