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This life
who lives it...
me
and if that is the case
then it is time
I must be free
Confined no more
enclosed in isolation
for the fear it does consume
and leaves me in such desperation
I want this one so much
for he's connected to my soul
does he have the stamina
to make half of me whole??
I'm going, moving on 
no matter what the future holds
and waiting for my destiny
as life unveiles, unfolds...

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

mmm, good and bad

"I want this one so much for he’s connected to my soul does he have the stamina to make half of me whole?" Is a lie within a poem of truth The rest is bloody brilliant! Go grrl! Cheers, Jess, “The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue.” Emma Goldman
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JosephSommers

16 years 1 month ago

Another good write. I like

Another good write. I like how you start out asking your self "This life who lives it…" then you answer "me". Right away i got the feeling you lost control of your life but you were taking it back. I’m going, moving on no matter what the future holds and waiting for my destiny as life unveils, unfolds… Great ending!