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Exposed

I found inside my diary,
 a voice of some surprise.
Today i found my diary had befallen curious eyes.

Now should you read such private thoughts,
 then for you they should keep.
For no audience should have to see
 or mouth should have to speak.

Come inside my diary,
 stroll inside my mind,
But just be warned...
beware your tread, or bad things you will find.

Be wary of the darkness,
 of the things your yet to know,
Be careful because they can follow you,
 Every where you go.
— xraycat, Mar 28, 2010

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lou

lou

16 years 2 months ago

I like it

I like this poem it reads well, except for the line 3 i found didnt quite flow, but maybe just me. A enjoyable read and just how a diary should be.
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xraycat

16 years 2 months ago

hi..yes i love your

hi..yes i love your suggestion!, i was not sure about line 5, but i think the word secret is really fitting and the same for line 14, i was actually going to repeat be warying but choose careful... thank you, im glad you enjoyed it! cathryn
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Loved it

Very good about your diary and your words well spoken. Good job Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.