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Bonitaj

Mar 27, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

SOUR GRAPES

upended, upstaged, unloved and unatoned by one so intransigent, incapable, insincere and alone who remains ruthless, recalitrant, remorseless and alone...

BjR 27 March, '10

— Bonitaj, Mar 27, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down, but briefly :, AUDEN, T.S. ELIOT, DICKENSON, RILKE, THOREAU, RUMI ... the list is endless. Am inspired by many, especially those that live lives of "quiet desperation, and go to the grave with a song still in them" (THoreau)

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16 years 4 months ago

Loved the after thought

of Impotence... why didn't I think of that? Good to see whose side you're on!!! ;) Efgaristo! Boni

16 years 3 months ago

Who

are we talking of here? The protagonist or The other? Damn! but you're GOOD

16 years 3 months ago

Hmmmm

Thought provoking

16 years 3 months ago

Profound even … smiles

Profound even ... smiles Boni love JayCee

L

lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Aww

Yes, I think u have condensed them well but I hope behind this sour grapes your smile has now returned. XX

16 years 3 months ago

damn Indi

or should that be THANKS! YOU AND YOUR SPELL CHECK!! lol don't know how I miss 'em each time!:) Cheers Boni

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