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Dawns reveal, Part five
The lodge was filled with a buzz
as people arrived for the feast
smells of baked goodness and love
tables filled with plate full’s of meat
People started gathering around the fire
carved wooden bowls make the rounds
torch lights dancing upon the dark water
there was even plenty for the hounds
Chief Seliq wa till was bundle of nerves
and the tribe couldn’t wait for the reveal
the elders all gathered as if to confer
excitement set alive for all to feel
Grandfather set the mood with sage
all wondered what it could possibly be
brought forth was a hide covered cage
as the children pushed forward to see
the shadows produced a cracked voice
“from beyond the painted horizon line
our gods have blessed us with choice
a gift felt and appreciated as divine”
“With this choice we were taught to fly
but not being born with our own wings
we had to learn the how and the why’s
and the different details of such things”
“in our quest for a teacher we met many
Old grizzly taught us skills to live and thrive
Uncle elk showed his uses in an epiphany
Mother earth sending us the rest to survive”
“But to fly we had to find brother hawk
it was him who could teach us to fly high
it was his special wisdom that was sought
free of whim and full of the reason why”
“With our lessons we started our family’s
and we remember with each generation
and to be all that we have been meant to be
a grateful part of life’s generous tribal tree”
With a flash of black powder for effect
the voice faded and the story with it
all the lights came back up, tension set
it was time to see the chief s big gift
Seliq wa till stepped in front of lay lo la
“Welcome to my family’s home and land
I present you this gift of feathered promise
as you might consider the offer of my hand”
With that he removed the hide cover
revealing a tall and proud red tail hawk
his eyes and wings a nervous flutter
who would have guessed or even thought
She was silenced with her mouth open
such a gift she could not have for seen
what would she ever do with or keep him
this spiritual gift, what does it all mean
Children pushed forward, the elders smiled
her reaction was such as they had intended
all were satisfied for traveling long miles
a song rang out while fancy dancers descended
Julie
3-26-2010
As you can probably tell there will be a couple more parts, thanks to everyone and thier patience as I slowly write them all.
Critiques
DawningDaytripper
16 years 2 months ago
Feel free to correct my lost
DawningDaytripper
16 years 2 months ago
I shall take all of your
pamela
16 years 2 months ago
great job