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mantiscepter
Mar 27, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Seren

 your the stars above
warmth and love

a voice in a far off land

words on a page
My heart does engage

 hope for voices unheard

Cherished a friend
at time's soft end

I see your face above

as twilight divides
dreams decide

a fate or maybe not

by each
our worlds survive






— mantiscepter, Mar 27, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear John

I cannot thank you enough for this ... big hugs and a few tears go with my comment ... your a wonderful friend I feel blessed to have met you all those months ago now ... I am honoured by your poem thank you love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe
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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

Friends

You are the one, that starts each day I live. you are creative. talented, and to be feared some times. though a beauty within shines outward. More than all the other attributes you hold. your Friend John. P.S. You never have to thank me. I Thank You.. Love and Hugs.
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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

Seren

Hi judyanne. was nice to hear from you and to meet you, I'm John. happy to hear you liked this write. An easy subject to write on !!. Hope to see you around the site, and thanks again. Mantiscepter
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Dear John

How sweet. Jayne is lucky to have a friend like you. She will love this, oops, yes she does. XX