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Mar 27, 2010
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Dixie Rose shattered, salt dropped and shattered again
s s s reese creek road f a f f
t t u soldiers there knew it a a f
r t t e well like i the bendy u l a
e r banditty Texas twists a l l t
t r r yellow lines no shoulder t t l
a s h s twenty-eight feet on the e h h
o o h o pavement pointing with h e e a
c c s burnt accuracy to a broken a r a
k k toothed solemn grin of a t r t t
r e r r e wood post cattle wire r r u r
b e r m m e fence gashed grass in u r u n u
m e b r e the gap found your glasses n i u n n
e b e e r in a poc bent and lame u r n g i
e e r r m empty i put them in my n g g
d d pocket to give you later d d r d r
d u habits, huh? d r r r
d m u can't remember what i uu r u n u
m b m did with them now u n k n
b b but still see them staring k k n k
a b b b up at me wi
a a b a and pebble th sand eyes g g g u
b b l looking los pupils g u u i g
b l b l and impu t and useless l u l
e l e much to dent u l
l e b e e them a o late t l u
nd I t t
a a l a I was showing dad s i s s
l l a m l how to download his i m i s i p
m os o m s m doo-wops and obscurities p p m p m i
o s t s o t he hadn't heard in thirty p l e l l e
b l b years- the last time i'd a s s
b u l see that spark there- s a l a
u u when a knock knock knock t l a t l
e e u made for a salty evening t t l
f f l f family was the importance f f f l l
l o f l to him friends couldn't l u l l f u f
o a o call, mine at least tt u e t u t
t a t o t some bridges make pathetic r e r r e t
g g kindling i got messages b u b b
g e o o n he got real busy u b r u r
e o e n n no time! none to dwell n r n r n
t t e tt his despair of finding n n o n
r t e e t no purchase at the o o t n
r r edge of a dark jagged t n h t i t
r o r canyons slippery lip hi g i h i
o o r r he's better now h gn n g
h a h h still floating a bit e t t e t
h a a a without his rock i e a t e
h r d a sing song and cry a r a r e
d r d r for him but he does r s s a
y e y not know this as h mh h
s y s e i'm sure he does for me h m m
t t o t so many pieces f f o f
t o t d o lost of me like you o v o e v r f r
a d d o shattered and scattered e f r e
y a like leaves and anyone e e v e v e
s s t s that knows they'll be h h o h
s i t l forgotten- but your plot o o l o d l
l i i l t still plays out, mom h d l d l d
m I promise h m
t t u soldiers there knew it a a f
r t t e well like i the bendy u l a
e r banditty Texas twists a l l t
t r r yellow lines no shoulder t t l
a s h s twenty-eight feet on the e h h
o o h o pavement pointing with h e e a
c c s burnt accuracy to a broken a r a
k k toothed solemn grin of a t r t t
r e r r e wood post cattle wire r r u r
b e r m m e fence gashed grass in u r u n u
m e b r e the gap found your glasses n i u n n
e b e e r in a poc bent and lame u r n g i
e e r r m empty i put them in my n g g
d d pocket to give you later d d r d r
d u habits, huh? d r r r
d m u can't remember what i uu r u n u
m b m did with them now u n k n
b b but still see them staring k k n k
a b b b up at me wi
a a b a and pebble th sand eyes g g g u
b b l looking los pupils g u u i g
b l b l and impu t and useless l u l
e l e much to dent u l
l e b e e them a o late t l u
nd I t t
a a l a I was showing dad s i s s
l l a m l how to download his i m i s i p
m os o m s m doo-wops and obscurities p p m p m i
o s t s o t he hadn't heard in thirty p l e l l e
b l b years- the last time i'd a s s
b u l see that spark there- s a l a
u u when a knock knock knock t l a t l
e e u made for a salty evening t t l
f f l f family was the importance f f f l l
l o f l to him friends couldn't l u l l f u f
o a o call, mine at least tt u e t u t
t a t o t some bridges make pathetic r e r r e t
g g kindling i got messages b u b b
g e o o n he got real busy u b r u r
e o e n n no time! none to dwell n r n r n
t t e tt his despair of finding n n o n
r t e e t no purchase at the o o t n
r r edge of a dark jagged t n h t i t
r o r canyons slippery lip hi g i h i
o o r r he's better now h gn n g
h a h h still floating a bit e t t e t
h a a a without his rock i e a t e
h r d a sing song and cry a r a r e
d r d r for him but he does r s s a
y e y not know this as h mh h
s y s e i'm sure he does for me h m m
t t o t so many pieces f f o f
t o t d o lost of me like you o v o e v r f r
a d d o shattered and scattered e f r e
y a like leaves and anyone e e v e v e
s s t s that knows they'll be h h o h
s i t l forgotten- but your plot o o l o d l
l i i l t still plays out, mom h d l d l d
m I promise h m
— the_fool, Mar 27, 2010
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the_fool
16 years 2 months ago
flutters
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 2 months ago
hi