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The Forest of Unacquainted, Indistinguishable Love

The Forest of Unacquainted indistinguishable Love
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A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
— Sinbadthesailorman, Mar 26, 2010

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Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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Mark

Mark

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Sinbad

Off the get go I was confused but intrigued by the title of this. Not sure exactly what indi-scripted means so I'm thinking this poem this A thought lol is mindspice (let me know ok?) I liked the story it is kind of sci fi. The language I found to be good although a bit vague in regards to a clear vision for the experience (kind of like a dream) This is how I see your poem now. Regards, Mark Resilient Flexibility
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 2 months ago

I use to Bounce a little, Tend Bar, and Bar back a lot.

Indi- Scripted is Just a sound a like, for me as In un*de*scribble as If in the word scribble as in a writen rush But I don't always make prefect sense as in this poem I did scribble, I was recalling In my head as I was writing. This One Night, at the Bar, on a DJ dance Night, a new birthday Girl, a 21yr old a First Timer At the Bar I was working at But I was not on duty that night, Her First time ever in the Bar alone, she was Being A little Over fed by a new Bartender who did not Know how to watch the suroundings as good as we first thought her able too! The scene is never pretty as this Young Girl was flaming hot! and Had just broken up with the Guy she had a new baby with "open Season" in other words. She stayed all night till closing and was wasted, almost pass out, I recalled this scene and scribbled it down After I seen her Home personaly and safely unscathed and unharmed! I wrote this that Night and Just recalled it from a papper pile I was sorting through. And just the other Day I seen Her Doing Fine and Okay on her own still, It's been about four years now and I know Her but she doesn't truely Know If It was Me that Got her Home in the that weakened state and moment of whatever! But if it wasn't For One of Our other bartenders who was drinking in the bar that night, who shouldn't Have been stepping up and calling me at Home I would have Not interfered In this young Ladies mixed up Choices, But Because of This well versed and Train Bartender. I avoided big Promblems, For all of Us, Her the older bartender, the new Bartender, the Young Girl and the Bar its self! Not to mention The Child! and its mothers reputation of being a truly Good Girl in this small Town! But what of all the others I was thinking as I wrote this and revised it! I believe she would have meet with Harm for sure this night there was at least seven Dudes Plotting against her Not leaving alone a Pretty rough crowd Back then at this Bar I came Up with this write!