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judyanne
judyanne
Mar 26, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

i am






I Am being.

Oblivious grace, eternal serenity,

awareness ebbed,

languidly infused,

undisturbed, ubiquitous.

 

A seed of need stirs.

Restlessness, a fidget

fluttering the fabric

irradiating a candle far away

now to be forever perceived.

 

Rippling breeze gently brushes substance -

a gasp,

 

a yawn

takes space from me,

within a knowing is allowed.

I remember.

 

A spark of awareness -

I own boredom.

i am manifest






 

— judyanne, Mar 26, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

I love this Judy. I often

I love this Judy. I often feel restless about many things and it can manifest, so much so that I retreat into myself. But thankfully, with help, I can bring about some light into the darkness that can engulf me. Rosina xena465
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

I can not find words to commnet,

But I love the haunting evocative piece. Cheers, Jess, “The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue.” Emma Goldman
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

thanks jess

i'm glad you like it i'm also glad you're lost for words - that's a huge compliment love judy
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Judd

A poignant write ... speechless love and hugs Jayne-Chloe
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

JC

love and hugs back at you love judd xxxx
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

thanks troy

i claim poetic license and will use the two adjectives.... they say what i want to say thanks anyway love judy
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

undisurbed ubiquitous

if i take out 'into' and put commas between them? awareness ebbed, languidly infused, undisturbed, ubiquitous. would that soothe your correctness? lol judy
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

done

xxx thanks troy lol judy
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

nice to meet you edwin

thank you for visiting and for your insightful comment i love your take on it, as i was writing i was into the thought of being becoming manifest, and how it is only need, boredom or discomfort which makes us ‘do’. Meditation, sleep, and even birth (thus the candle lit in the distance,) fit the thought troy had it though - let there be light lol judy
chumfin

chumfin

16 years 2 months ago

i like this !

i was on time to really be a part of this, i really like the write. thanks for sharing it chumfin